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Whats a good thesis statement for my Research Paper. My paper is on Barrack Obama and John Mccain.?

22 Jul

In my paper I have to tell in my opinion which candidate is better for president based off their views/ plans for the Environment, Economy, and their foreign policy. I have chosen barrack obama. Any help with a conclusion would be appreciated also hence intros and conclusions are my weaknesses.

 
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  1. iNsTaNt pUdDiNhEaD

    July 22, 2010 at 5:24 am

    First of all, make sure that, in your paper, you spell his name correctly. ;)

    Then, maybe have your thesis statement somehow portray a choice between stepping into the future or staying stuck in some bizarre past. Good luck! ;)

     
  2. desert storm

    July 22, 2010 at 6:14 am

    TRY DISCUSSIN THE RACE ISSUE IN ALL THIS— TRY GOIN IN TO HOW THE PREVIOUS ISSUES CAN BE SETTLED IF OBAMA WINS- ALSO HOW AMERICA WOULD BE LEADIN THE WAY IN RACE RELATIONS IN THE MODERN FREE WORLD